Good beginnings!

Great work! I would like it more if you made it finished, just needs a lil' polish is all!

Totally Unexpected!

That was reallllly funny! It caught me so off gaurd i practicly jumped out of my seat! Thanks fr a great flash!

LOVE!

This game is realllly awesome, the style of drawing is like Paper Mario Style so that is cool. I know you already wrote that the text was going slow, but thats the only thing I see that could use improvement.